Feedback for "A Long Long Day (With Paul Otten)" by Casey
TAXI Listing S250123SS
What I like most about this song
I like the writing and the harmony vocal is a nice added touch in chorus, Charles.
I think you could improve this song by
A thought would be to alter the piano part in chorus to open up the section from the rest of the track. A soaring energy in chorus is a thought over being locked into the arpeggiation.
I returned or forwarded this song because
The chorus could offer a more break out energy with some production finesse.
Additional things I noticed...
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Listener ID: 374